Audience Feedback

Below is the video we showed in our first auidence screening


Based on the audience feedback, we came to the following conclusion:

• The blackouts are too long
• The shot reverse shot needs to flow more
• The piano sequence needs to be shorter
• The walking sequence has too many rough cuts
• We need to make the conversation shorter
• We need to edit the classroom sequence (or cut it out completely)
• Have a freeze frame and a description of the person within the classroom scene as an alternative.

In our questionnaire everybody liked the comedy aspect of the film as well as our epic fight scene, one part of our film that felt strange was the transition from the piano scene to the walking scene as the contrast of music, gave off two different types of tones.

so what we have decided to do is:

• To shorten the conversation with Nicolla and Grace.
• In the classroom scene, do the freeze frame idea if possible, if it still doesn't work out, we will scrap it all together, as a majority of the audience said that we should get rid of it.
• we may shorten the piano scene.
• we are cutting out the bit Coco sticks out her tongue.