Film Suggestions

After re-watching the entire film, we have managed to establish a detailed analysis of further corrections that need to be made:

• Piano sequence - The music needs to fade in, as it seems to start quite quickly
• The credits should come at the right part, e.g. the name should come next to the person playing the character
• Priscilla's name should have a short pause as she is the main character
• "Title make over" - The explanation mark in the title must be removed as it looks rather unprofessional.
• The "O.D.D" and '!' should also be removed to improve the appearance of the title, however, the same font can be used
• We must cut the speaking/walking scene even further
• Remove long shots of Priscilla walking
• Add quick shots of the characters in the classroom
• And finally, when Lorna says "Aren't you that piano girl?", we should put the title there (at the end of the scene)